Imagine a criminal trial that consisted of JUST the attorneys' closing statements, without the testimony of even ONE witness. Obviously, a lawyer could hardly expect to convince a jury that way. So you might be surprised to learn that the essays that most students write on standardized tests are just like such a trial! As an English teacher I can tell you that nearly every essay I have read has boiled down to 4 or 5 paragraphs of "I think I am right because...", and I can also tell you that that is NOT the way to impress the test graders. To accomplish that, just like the attorneys you will need "evidence".
Your evidence should take the form of examples from the following areas:
Literature - books, plays, poems, movies, song lyrics
History - people, places, events
Pop Culture - politics, famous people, famous movements
Family History - not YOUR life, but your grandparents, great-grandparents, etc. Especially think about your traditions and culture or how your family came to live where they do.
But here are a few caveats:
Don't use your own life: It's not very persuasive, resembling too closely the "I think I'm right" style of argument.
Don't EVER use any of the following examples: They are overused to the point of horror!
Romeo and Juliet
The Great Gatsby
The Catcher in the Rye
Martin Luther King, Jr. or Rosa Parks
Hitler
The current president or George Washington Don't make up stuff: You may expand a bit, to be sure, but fabricated evidence is hard to write with authority and will only serve to weaken your essay.
The fact is that you can use almost ANY example to prove almost any point. Seriously. This works especially well with examples from literature, because a great piece of literature always communicates ANY number of themes within the same story. For instance, consider Romeo and Juliet. You could say that the theme is any of these:
Love at first sight really happens.
True love is worth your life.
Gang warfare causes nothing but sorrow.
Lying to your parents always leads to disaster.
Absence does make the heart grow fonder.
... depending on your point of view.
LONG before test day pick 4 or 5 different sources. Choose some with which you are at least somewhat familiar. THINK about them, and then use them for EVERY essay you write. For example:
"However, as The Great Gatsby shows, what we love is more dangerous than what we fear."
"However, as The Great Gatsby shows, it is better to live in the country than to live in the city."
"However, as The Great Gatsby shows, challenges bring out our inner strengths."
"However, as The Great Gatsby shows, we need others to truly understand who we are."
So instead of spending ten minutes (or more!) of the precious test time trying to come up with evidence after you read the prompt, select your evidence BEFORE you go into the test room.
Do it right now! Make the following list and you will be READY!
Examples:
History -->
Literature -->
Pop Culture -->
Family History -->
If you go into the writing section of the test with examples in hand you will waste less time, avoid the "I think because...' type of essay and write a more authoritative and ultimately higher-scoring paper.
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